Another really good answer, Olly, and another Band 5 mark for the collection. You might have needed more contextual information if the question had been worded differently, but what you’ve got is fine for this. You could always use more technical terminology, though. The conclusion you drew was also good…
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Another really good answer, Olly, and another Band 5 mark for the collection. You might have needed more contextual information if the question had been worded differently, but what you’ve got is fine for this. You could always use more technical terminology, though. The conclusion you drew was also good…
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